superb!
You are the flash version of Chuck Palaniuk.
Only someone like you could do justice to a remake of fight club!
superb!
You are the flash version of Chuck Palaniuk.
Only someone like you could do justice to a remake of fight club!
it's too lazy...
some simple tweaks could have made this alot better. spenting the extra time to add true fbf animation ti this would have done wonders.
the comedy is by no means near family guy, the key to family guy isnt a long pause, its to have subtle changes and akward situations run by as fast as possible, its not just a pause, its timing...
its a decent idea, an old one, but decent. the punch line was seen a mile away.
your saving factor to this flash is the addition of spam... SPAM RULES ALL!
can't wait to see some improvements on the next one!
amazing
somebody give this guy a production crew! this work is amazing bravo!
hmm...
one of the greatest things about early game music os the energy displayed within its electronic boundaries. what you have here is classic and cool, but its poorly produced... it'll probably do well enough, but there were alot of errors and it was way too slow.
take some liberty in the songs structure, and some pride in your production.
i might have shown mercy to this submission if you didn't have the word clock in your name as well...
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Yeah, I only had 1 take. And the clock comment...fuck you.
this isnt bad!
pretty funny and original
better graphics and less stroke strobe effects would help.
good stuff though!
good luck!
Thanks for the Compliments. yah i was actually deciding against the strobe but it was meant as a kind of joke playing on with the simpsons Super Siezure robots things.
yah thanks for the support.
later
a bit o advice
speed up the animations, don't waste time with movement in the corner of the screen, its bad animation etiquette. focous on the movement, never on a still screen.
background music would do wonders, better graphics would help, as well as better (and more numerous) voice actors.
what?
hmm... very confused....
mebe the rest of the series will clear up my un quenchable curiosity...
good stuff
heheheee
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